Sunday, 25 September 2011

Through the tunnel

SETTING: England

PLOT:
This is a story of a small boy who went on holiday to the beach with his mother. he did almost everyting his mother told him except for this one morning he decided that he wanted to go to the other side of the beach and look at some rocks, at the same time he was not so sure if it was the right thing to living his mother all by herself as he never did before.jerry's mother was quite a possessive and protective of jerry and not long enough she got worried and went off looking for jerry.He tried getting away form his mother by swimin into the bay but eventually came back and met some foreign big boys- men to him  and as hard as it was for him he made friends and swam with them, Jerry was very happy andlater while seatting he saw a group of boys gathering decided to join them and as he approach them they took their clothes and left, Jerry felt horrible and cried there was no one to see him so he cried out. Jerry swam out where he could see his mother and started nagging for swimming goggles, because the salty water was burning his eyes, when he got the goggles he head back to the bay swiming all the way to the down to the ocean floor. While diving he found a dark tunnel,or hole as he called it and he dedcided to find a way through it,he trained himself on how to hold his breath under water which caused his nose to bleed at night,untill he could hold his breath till about 2 minutes and that was enough for him to attempt again before they leave, Jerry went back into the water but he was quite afraid but he wanted to do so bad that he just went in, swming through the tunnen was very challenging for him as he though of dying and nobody finding his body, eventually he swam though but his nose bled and he decided to go home after reaching his goal,and slept and had lunch with his mother afterwards.


MAIN CHARACTER:Jerry is smart small boy who loved swimming more than anything. he did not hve that many friends nor was it that easy for him to make friends.jerry is quite emotion and soft at heart.Jerry was persistent, he set himself a goal and he achieved it even though it was not easy for him.Jerry got quite lonely even with his mother around and the only thing on his mind was swiming and trying to make friends.He worked hard to enjoy his holiday all by himself.

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